This is going to drive me crazy. First of all you've got an epicanthic eye fold, which indicates you are of asian descent. yet you're white/non-hispanic. second, your use of english, even for being a californian, is appalling. "I'm young charming and charismatic lady" at 23 you don't need to announce you're young. or a lady. on with the corrections: "with [a] good sense of humor, with no bad habits." either use "without" and no "no", or "and with no", otherwise it's a weird sentence (IN English, for other languages it's quite normal). I like music, dancing, singing, I like barbecue on the nature," mm I like barbecue on the nature too. first I got to kill it then skin it, and light up a fire. then lots of barbecue. yum yum. "like spending time with my friends," at 23 you don't spend time with your friends. you hangout or get-together or something. "but on the first time for me is always family and my future beloved man." wtf? WHERE are you really from? here's the deal. I'll correct your english and when you scam these guys, paypal me a tutoring fee. Or If you're really from san diego, which I doubt, you really need help with your composition.
